PLEASE CAN YOU HELP ME IF YOU SPEAK FLUENTLY ENGLISH
before i put this text on my english blog can you correct the faults i made. thanks a lot .
this is a part of " carnet de voyagel "2nd day
here it is:
Sidi leads us in a sort of market (trade hall) encircled by high walls which darken the place
A real labyrinth takes place in front of us. On each side tiny storage room where pile up ,in a very precarious balance ,shoes ,tissues,and one thousand of other things too. It's necessary to us to elbow one's way through bas,boxes which blokc a passage so narrow that ,even without these hillocks of packages 2 persons have difficulties to walk there ...
the young tuareg after some shakehands, some words pronounced in a harsh language with "les uns et les autres" seeming not to find what he searches ,crosses a narrow opening, arnaud and I,always on his heels
to be continued